To be honest we don’t need inventions we already have so many inventions. If we made any they would probably be used by only a few people since we have so many, but another really good invention could actually be a flying car I mean there aren’t many and it would be cool to have a plane and a car. but I already know that a flying car would be really expensive and high priced, so maybe we don’t need a flying car but so far, we have to much I think we don’t need anymore. Maybe in like 10 years we will get a new transportation system like a mini car kind of like a golf cart but smaller and its plastic like a real car we can also make it go like 40-50 mph on a sidewalk or something.
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This is a very good idea. Your writing is very good considering you are in 5th grade. I do have a couple of comments about your post though: 1) always remember to start sentences’ first words with a capital letter. It makes it a lot easier to read and understand. 2) remember when using introductory phrases such as “to be honest” etc., always use commas at the end of these as well. 3) commas always begin after “but.” I know this is a lot, but these are just some rules that really helped me write, when I was your age. Please don’t take these corrections the wrong way. Your post was still very good! I just wanted to help you make it even better!!
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thank you for the comment
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What a sweet way to offer feed back and constructive criticism. Well done.
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